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A reflected sunset
drowns inside
twin black holes.
Her thin fingers
slip down
rusted iron bars;
her palms
come away blushing with
unwanted crimson
snowflakes.
She wore petrichor
for perfume
when he found her -
he simply
cloaked himself
in rot.
Now
blood drops,
like tears,
splash
against stone -
gnaw the earth
deep -
the Institute
must have it.
He calls himself
reviver,
but when he
speaks her name
his words are
a pale horse's
hoofbeats,
and her throat
a garden
overgrown
with bitter
weeds.
drowns inside
twin black holes.
Her thin fingers
slip down
rusted iron bars;
her palms
come away blushing with
unwanted crimson
snowflakes.
She wore petrichor
for perfume
when he found her -
he simply
cloaked himself
in rot.
Now
blood drops,
like tears,
splash
against stone -
gnaw the earth
deep -
the Institute
must have it.
He calls himself
reviver,
but when he
speaks her name
his words are
a pale horse's
hoofbeats,
and her throat
a garden
overgrown
with bitter
weeds.
Written for - NaPoWriMo Challenge 3
Write a poem that includes each of the five senses (touch, sight, smell, sound, taste) without overtly naming any of them.
Use at least one of the following tools in the poem: Metonymy, Enjambment, palindrome, allusion, onomatopoeia
Bonus if you're able to use more than one!
Metonymy - the Institute (from the 99 Percent Dark universe)
Enjambment - nearly all my lines use this...
Palindrome - "reviver"
allusion - pale horse (allusion to Death)
onomatopoeia - "splash"
Inspired by Amanda and MacCloud / 99 Percent Dark
Write a poem that includes each of the five senses (touch, sight, smell, sound, taste) without overtly naming any of them.
Use at least one of the following tools in the poem: Metonymy, Enjambment, palindrome, allusion, onomatopoeia
Bonus if you're able to use more than one!
Metonymy - the Institute (from the 99 Percent Dark universe)
Enjambment - nearly all my lines use this...
Palindrome - "reviver"
allusion - pale horse (allusion to Death)
onomatopoeia - "splash"
Inspired by Amanda and MacCloud / 99 Percent Dark
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I especially like the third stanza of this!